SNAKE IN THE
GARDEN
...Before the time of cities, before
Atlanta, when men roamed as primitive animals, Poseidon
came down from Olympus for he loved the Earth-born woman
named Cleito, daughter of Evenor and Leucippe. Poseidon
sheltered and seduced Cleito until she bore for him five
pair of male children. Of the eldest he named Atlas, who
became king of Atlantis and was given the largest and
most favorable lands. The other male children became
princes, and by the wishes of Poseidon, each was given
a provence over which they held sway...
...Poseidon was pleased and gave to
his sons the art of civilization. Gone were times when
men must scamper about the wilds, lest he wishes. The
great gift of Poseidon brought letters and numbers and
dwellings and goods and honor with multitudes. Poseidon
bestowed his gift in this wise; he wrought the first of
all cities with his own hand and bade his sons to look
on. He told each of his sons to forge such a
civilization in the lands over which they held sway,
except for the eldest, Atlas, who would rule the city
Atlanta, for only a king shall rule a city built by the
hand of Poseidon...
The call of a cock announced daybreak and woke
Odius from a comfortable night's sleep. Odius laid in bed long
enough to savor those fleeting restful moments that come with the
passing of slumber.
He always spent the first minutes of the day
trying to recall dreams from the previous night. The Great Marce
told him to heed his dreams; for they are the true substance of a
man's thoughts. He recalled nothing other than a vague image of
a unicorn, much like the beast he had seen on the slopes of Tritus
several weeks earlier.
Odius vividly remembered that day
and the majestic creature. It was a mare in
her fifth or sixth summer. They were extremely friendly creatures
and not the least bit dangerous, yet they were as untameable as
winter storms. Unicorns had a habit of looking directly into a
human's eyes, as if to look deep into the soul and see the true
merit of the person within. This made many people uncomfortable
because they feared the animal could see their darkest deed.
Odius took note of the vague image left by his
dream, but made no effort to analyze it or link it with the mare
on the slope of Tritus. He rubbed his eyes then stretched to push
the sleep from his muscles. After a drawn-out yawn, he took a
deep breath of fresh morning air.
Reluctantly, Odius slid a foot out from under
the bedclothes and placed it on the warm stone floor. The warmth
came from firestones which were laid down before the dwelling was
built. Firestones were mined from a quarry beyond Mount Atlas.
They were yellowish-orange in color and hot to the touch. They
never seemed to cool down and were used as a source of heat for
most dwellings across the continent of Atlantis. Firestones were
a prized resource and never exported or traded with foreigners
no matter how attractive the offer might
be.
After a moment or two, Odius rolled back the
bedclothes then sat up on the feather-stuffed mattress. He was a
young man in his late twenties, fair skin, light hair, and blue
eyes. What he lacked in build he made up for with intelligence.
He was of average height and generally considered attractive by
women of his time.
Although several women expressed interest in
him, he had not settled down to a wife or even socialized with a
woman on a consistent basis. His celibacy was by no means due to
lack of interest in the fairer sex
it was because of his position and fear of
corruption.
For the last six years Odius has been an
apprentice to the Great Marce. He was only an apprentice, but in
the years ahead he himself would become the Great Marce, master of
the crystal. Odius was to become one of the most powerful figures
on the entire continent of Atlantis. Already he was known
throughout the city as apprentice to the Great Marce, to the point
where his position preceded him. It was often one of the first
subjects new acquaintances would bring up.
Most women Odius met knew who he was and what
he would eventually become. If they were not aware of his
position they soon found out. When befriended by a pretty woman,
he could never be sure whether she was interested in him as a man
or as the Great Marce. He was afraid of being
led on and snared as a prize. Such circumstances could only lead
to misery, or worse, abuse of power. He wished he could have met
a woman who was ignorant to his destiny. Then he would know for
certain how she felt about him as a man. Perhaps this fear would
pass with age, as for now he would not concern himself with a
relationship and concentrate on his apprenticeship.
After sitting for a few seconds, he stood up
then staggered across the floor toward the washroom. He briefly
look around his modest dwelling as his eyes adjusted to the
morning light.
His dwelling was small, hardly fifteen feet
square, and cut from a solid block of stone. The white stone was
very fine grain and quite similar to marble in texture and color.
The stone was cut to a flat, smooth finish both inside and out,
and all corners were perfectly perpendicular. The dwelling was
divided into two rooms, the smaller of which was a washroom. It
was four by six feet and located in a corner opposite the
entrance. The larger room served for sleeping, working, and
relaxing.
His dwelling was furnished with a small table,
two chairs, shelves, and two trunks, all fashioned from various
hardwoods. The shelves were stocked with assorted pottery, tinted
goblets, and brass dinnerware. A rack for storing books in the
form of scrolls hung on one of the walls and several clay oil
lamps were set on small shelves near the ceiling.
Two plants in hanging pots grabbed the morning
light from one of the three glass windows. The glass had a faint
pink tint and crude texture which cast swirlish patterns across
the stone floor. Each piece of glass could be removed by
unfastening two brass catches on the sides of the frame. The door
to the dwelling was made of tight grained mahogany and decorated
on both sides with inlaid brass and orichalcum (1). The entire
structure was immaculately clean both inside and out. It was
typical of most Atlantean dwellings for one or two persons.
Inside the washroom, Odius squinted at a mirror
of finely polished silver then ran his hands through his hair. A
marble likeness of a rhinoceros head was mounted on the wall below
the mirror. He pulled and tugged at the rhino's horn until the
horn slid outward an inch or so. Water began to trickle from the
rhino's mouth into a cistern. Odius cupped his hands under the
fixture to capture a cold drink of water.
The cistern had a drain, which could be closed
with a wooden stopper. When the stopper was pulled, or when the
cistern overflowed, water trickled into an adjacent trough which
served as a toilet. The trough was gradually tapered toward a
large drain hole at the opposite end. A crude trap kept any smell
from escaping out of the sump below.
After Odius turned off the water, he stepped
into an Atlantean version of a shower. The entire ceiling of the
shower was made of porus rock similar to volcanic pumice. This
rock formed the bottom of a shallow tank, which was filled with
firestones. When the shower was turned on, water came up from an
aqueduct under the city and filled the tank where it was warmed by
firestones. The warm water slowly seeped through the porus rock,
then dripped in a gentle uniform pattern like summer rain.
Odius continued his morning routine. He was a
creature of habit and preferred it that way. The next step in his
routine was to plan the coming day at work while he showered.
After that, it would be time for breakfast, then a walk to work
along the canal. This was a typical day for Odius, it was nothing
special
or so he thought.
This particular day was indeed special for a
young Greek named Marcus. This was to be his first visit to the
world famous land of Atlantis. Marcus was about the same age as
Odius but that was where all similarities ended. Marcus was not
nearly as educated as Odius, noticeably shorter, and quite stocky.
His stereotypical Greek features, olive complexion, dark curly
hair, and hazel eyes would make him stand out as a foreigner in
the fairer race of Atlanteans. Marcus was a galley dredge on his
twentieth day at the handle of an oar.
He was new on that crew and low in seniority.
He spent most of the voyage in the same aisle position where he
found himself that morning. The aisle position was less desirable
since its oars were longer and heavier than the oars at the
porthole positions.
His muscles ached with each stroke of the oar.
He was tired and hungry. His skin felt filthy and crawly after
twenty days of pulling, lifting, pulling, lifting, over and over
to the beat of the hammers and their dull, monotonous cadence. He
was tired of listening to the ship creek, tired of smelling his
shipmates, and tired of stroking that oar.
Marcus looked at Sampson, who sat next to him
at the porthole position. He opened his mouth as if to speak,
then thought better of it. Marcus gave a quick, nervous glance
through the deck grate overhead. Satisfied that the overseer was
not watching, he again turned his head toward Sampson.
"Can you see anything yet?"
Sampson glanced at the same grate, then briefly
looked over the oarlock on the next forward stroke.
"Yes, Water and oars."
"Someone on the other side said they saw
land."
Sampson did not seem to be interested. He had
been a galley drudge for many years and stopped counting voyages
long ago. For Sampson this was all routine. Marcus, on the other
hand, was thrilled with the prospect of pulling into port.
This was the first voyage Marcus had seen. He
was anxious to get out of the hold and see sunlight again. He was
also anxious to see the great city of Atlanta. He had heard so
many unbelievable stories about Atlanta
he hoped at least half of them were true.
"What are you going to take back with
you?" he asked Sampson.
"A belly full of wine and an eyeful of
beautiful women."
"Quiet down there!" the overseer
shouted from above.
The overseer watched the two men in the hold
below; he had nothing better to do. He was standing where the sun
shone and the air was fresh with morning mist. Any one of the
seamen below would have given a month's pay just to stand up here
for an hour, away from the stench and drudgery of the hold.
Satisfied that the men would remain silent, he wandered back to
Demesis, the merchant who chartered the vessel.
Demesis was a heavy set man in his early
fifties. He was a delegate of the Greek government and had sole
responsibility for their cargo. He was experienced both as a
merchant and a diplomat. His official mission was to trade their
government-owned cargo in Atlanta for gold and ivory which he
would take back to the palace at Athens.
This particular mission was to be one of his
easier tasks. The barter had already been arranged, the price was
set, and he knew his Atlantean contact well. He would not have to
dicker and quibble over a price or devise a ploy to gain any
advantage. This was suppose to be a simple matter of unloading
their goods then taking their payment of gold and ivory back to
home port.
"Remarkable city," Demesis said while
looking in the general direction of Atlanta.
"Aye," replied the overseer.
"After many a voyage to these lands, she is still something
to behold."
They were speaking strictly from experience because Atlanta did
not look all that impressive from the sea. A stone wall, which
met the sea at its southern most point, completely surrounded
Atlanta and hid every detail of the city. The only seaward
entrance to the city was through a gate in the massive wall. The
two 150-foot brass gates were usually open during peacetime and
always closed during time of war. The impressive sights began
beyond the gate, where a five and a half mile canal took ships to
and from a circular harbor at the center of the city.
The harbor was actually a perfectly circular
canal 1,800 feet in width and almost two and a half miles in
diameter. This canal was known as the Outer Harbor and was open
to private and foreign vessels. It had docking facilities to
accommodate 800 ships. Two covered bridges crossed the Outer
Harbor and allowed access to the island at the center. The
bridges were 100 feet wide and high enough to clear masts of any
seagoing vessel.
Since land was about 80 feet above sea level at
the Outer Harbor, the sides of the harbor were 80 feet tall. The
outermost side was tapered to a 6% grade and covered with
warehouses, shops, and streets. The opposite side, near the
island at the center, was sheer rock. Shipping traffic kept
toward the inside wall, while docking facilities littered the
outside grade.
The island at the center of the Outer Harbor
was perimetered by a stone wall covered with brass. Beyond the
brass wall was an 1,800-foot strip of land, then another circular
canal 1,200 feet in width. This canal was known as the Middle
Harbor and was reserved for military vessels. Two short access
canals allowed ships to pass from the Outer Harbor to the Middle
Harbor. These access canals could be secured by gates at the
brass wall. There was also a bridge over each access canal as
well as two bridges to access the island at the center.
The island at the center of the Middle Harbor
was surrounded by a wall covered with tin. Beyond that wall was
a 1,200-foot strip of land and another circular canal 600 feet
wide. This canal was known as the Inner Harbor and was reserved
for flagships and royal vessels.
The island at the center of the Inner Harbor
was surrounded by a wall covered with orichalcum. This was the
citadel where Atlanta's greatest treasures were kept. At the
exact center of the citadel, a monument to Poseidon and Cleito
stood behind a circular wall of solid gold. This wall had no
opening
the shrine inside was for the gods alone.
Poseidon's temple also stood in the citadel.
It was a massive building 600 feet in length and 300 feet in
width. The roof of the temple was covered by silver with the
exception of four gold pinnacles, one at each corner. Inside the
temple, orichalcum floors, walls, and pillars were topped by an
ivory ceiling. In the center of the temple, a larger than life
statue of Poseidon nearly touched the ceiling. The solid gold
statue stood in a chariot pulled by six winged horses. There were
other statues in Poseidon's temple including Nereids (2) on
dolphins.
Two palaces were located in the citadel; one
served the kingdom of Atlas, the other was used jointly by the ten
kingdoms of Atlantis. The rest of the citadel was filled with
assorted government buildings, the temple of the crystal, parks,
gardens, and a bathhouse for royalty. There were also countless
statues paying tribute to various gods and kings of past
generations. These statues were fashioned from a wide variety of
materials ranging from stone to precious metals.
The strip of land between the Inner Harbor and
Middle Harbor had no official name but most people referred to it
as the royal district. This name probably came about because that
was the area where lesser members of royalty lived. High ranking
royalty lived in the palace while those who were related but had
no official capacity lived in the royal district. Likewise,
government officials, such as the Great Marce, scholars, and
philosophers lived in the royal district. The royal district also
had quarters for visiting dignitaries as well as the typical
gardens, parks, bathhouses, and statues honoring the gods.
The strip of land between the Middle Harbor and
Outer Harbor was used for public exhibition and became known as
the public district. This was the location of a stadium, an
amphitheater, and a racetrack for both athletes and horses. The
public district also had a large covered pavilion for public
meetings as well as the usual; gardens, parks, and yes, more
statues honoring the gods.
The larger part of the city, that area between
the Outer Harbor and the stone wall at the sea, also had its share
of parks, gardens, and statues. It seemed like a new statue was
dedicated every week or so in Atlanta. The larger part of the
city was filled with homes, shops, warehouses, and small
manufacturing facilities for goods such as cloth, pottery, glass,
or metal working. Although there was no fine dividing line,
private residences were generally located in the outermost regions
near the stone wall, while shops and manufacturing facilities were
generally closer to the center. All of the warehouses were
located along the edge of the Outer Harbor. One of these
warehouses was owned by a merchant named Averon.
Averon specialized in foreign trade. His
warehouse was always well-stocked with everything from oils and
incense to rare works of art. If someone needed a rare item from
exotic lands, Averon was the man to see. If he did not have it,
he could certainly get it within several months.
Averon started that day's work long before
sunrise. He had to move stores to make room for merchandise due
in from Greece. Averon had already finished that chore and had
sat down to his books. His attention was diverted from his work
when a silver chariot raced up to the front of his warehouse.
The chariot was predominantly silver with a
small amount of gold trim. It was pulled by two white horses
covered with foam as if they had been pushed hard for many long
miles. The chariot rattled and clanked as it wheeled to a sudden
stop.
"Whoa... Whoa there!" the driver
shouted as he pulled on the reins without mercy.
The exhausted horses stopped the heavy chariot,
then one of them reared from the strain of its bit. The chariot
slowly rolled forward and back to nervous hoofsteps as the driver
jumped off. Averon stood up and watched as the man approach.
Averon assumed the man was a high ranking
official because of his privileged armor. The warrior's armor
consisted of a half helmet and small chest piece, both of highly
polished silver. This armor was worn for show or diplomatic
missions. During time of battle the warrior would have worn a
full helmet and a much larger chest piece, both of which were made
of a stronger tin alloy. Averon recognized the man's coat of
arms; he was a warrior from the kingdom of Gades.
Gades was an adjacent kingdom on the east coast
of Atlantis. It was the smallest of the ten kingdoms and was
wedged between the northeast border of Atlas and the sea. Its
short coastline was only five days voyage due west of the Pillars
Of Hercules (3).
The man marched up to Averon as briskly as he
drove his horses. He stopped, saluted with a closed fist at his
shoulder, then boldly announced his business.
"I bear a message from the king of Gades
for the merchant Averon!"
"I am he."
The warrior produced a piece of parchment,
which was folded in thirds and closed with a wax seal. Averon
examined the letter. The wax seal was imprinted with the king's
official mark
it was genuine. The king of Gades actually
sent Averon a message by royal courier!
What does the king want of me, he thought, a
mere merchant?
Suddenly, he smelled a profit and his face
began to glow.
Averon broke the seal then began to read the
letter while the warrior stood steadfast and firm. As Averon
read, his expression changed to reflect his confusion. When he
was done, he briefly turned the letter over to check for marks on
the other side, then read it again. The warrior continued to
wait.
Averon looked at the warrior in confusion.
"The king has summoned me to Gades?"
"He has," the warrior replied.
"I can not... I have a shipment due in
from Greece today."
"The king has instructed me to serve in
your absence."
"I don't have to go," Averon
retorted. "I am not one of his subjects. Only the king of
Atlas can force my will."
"The decision is yours," the warrior
replied.
"What does the king need of me?"
"I am not exactly sure... although, I
believe it has something to do with Egyptian
merchandise."
Averon was quite undecided
the warrior could see that.
"The king seemed most anxious about this
matter." The warrior tried to persuade Averon without
getting pushy.
Averon already had a commitment today. But,
the king of Gades could be a very profitable trading partner.
This could be a big improvement to his already flourishing
business. He thought more about the profit potential.
As for his commitment, the deal was already set
up. Anyone could handle the transaction. He looked over the
warrior and thought how he had conducted himself in a most
professional manner. Surely he could be trusted to carry out the
transaction with Greece.
"You say you will serve in my
place?"
The warrior nodded.
"Very well, I will see your king in
Gades." Averon smiled as he folded the letter. "Follow
me, I'll show you what must be done."
Averon talked to the warrior as they walked
toward a corner of the warehouse. The corner sheltered a table
that he used as a desk and office. "You will be meeting with
a merchant from Greece named Demesis. He will deliver oil, wine,
linens, and Persian silks. You will pay him in gold and
ivory."
Averon picked up a piece of parchment from the
table and handed it to the warrior.
"This is the tally. Make sure he delivers
these numbers on the tally
take no more nor less."
Averon paused for a moment while the warrior
examined the tally. "Pay him the numbers shown on the tally
again, no more nor less."
When the warrior finished reading the tally, he
set the parchment on the table, then looked at Averon.
"Where shall I stack his goods?"
"Follow me."
Averon escorted the warrior to an empty space
near a small crate and several neat bundles of ivory. He motioned
to the open space.
"Stack his goods here," then he
pointed to the crate and ivory, "Pay him with this. Any
questions?"
"Yes, what of other business?" he
asked.
Averon thought for a moment before
replying.
"Take an appointment for my
return."
"As you wish... anything else?"
Averon shook his head.
"Be rest assured, I'll care for your shop.
You should not keep the king waiting."
Averon nodded. "I'll get a horse at the
livery and leave straight away. Any questions?"
The warrior shook his head. "Go and have
a safe journey."
Averon nodded.
Averon left for the livery. His anticipation
of large profits overpowered any concerns about leaving his shop
with the warrior. By the time he reached the livery he convinced
himself that he was doing the right thing and that the warrior was
of honest character. After all, the warrior was an official
courier of the king
and the letter was quite authentic.
Averon left in such haste that he never
bothered to ask the warrior's name. He signed for a horse at the
livery and was outside the city gates within the hour. He rode
hard as his mind's eye painted a greedy picture of treasures and
wealth from the king of Gades.
Wealth was plentiful in Atlantis. It was a
rich continent with many forms of treasures, most of which were
just lying about for the taking. High quality gemstones were
often found in the hills and canyons. Precious metals were
abundant and remarkably pure. The forests were rich in exotic
hardwoods and abundant with wildlife. Even the fertile land,
which had two growing seasons each year, was considered a treasure
because there was nothing like it anywhere else on Earth.
One particular treasure stood above this sea of
wealth
the Crystal. The crystal was a gift from
Poseidon many centuries ago. Atlanteans considered it a gem, but
Poseidon bestowed it as a tool to ensure his children would
prosper. The crystal was a perfect sphere about the size of a
man's head. It was absolutely flawless and perfectly clear like
a mountain stream.
The crystal was much more than a gem; it was
power. It was immeasurable power. Anyone who knew its secrets
could conjure powers of nature to command storms, floods, or
earthquakes. It could bring rains for the crops or push ores from
the ground. A skilled master could use the crystal to build
canals or hollow buildings out of solid rock. For centuries the
crystal built the cities of Atlantis and destroyed armies of her
foes. Atlantis became great because of this uniquely powerful
treasure.
The secrets of the crystal were known by only
one man. This was a safeguard since the crystal's capacity for
good was matched by its capacity for evil. The power of the
crystal could be devastating if abused. To reduce any risk of
abuse, only one person was allowed to know its secrets and only
one person allowed to exercise its power. That person was given
the title of Great Marce.
There was an exception to this practice.
Periodically, a time would come when two people had to know the
crystal's secrets. This was necessary to pass the crystal's
secrets from one generation to the next. When the Great Marce
grew old, he would select an apprentice. The apprentice studied
under the master, until the master died. At that time, the
apprentice became the Great Marce
and the only man to know the crystal's
secrets.
The temple of the crystal was located in the
citadel of Atlanta. The base of the temple was roughly pyramid
shaped with extremely steep stairs on all four sides. The stairs
led to a flat foundation where the temple of the crystal
stood.
The crystal was kept in the crystal chamber,
which was a room at the exact center of the temple. Inside the
crystal chamber, a stone pedestal supported a solid gold casting.
The casting was somewhat abstract and resembled two hands with
forearms extending upward from a massive base. The forearms came
together at the wrists where the palms and fingertips cradled
Poseidon's gift.
The temple of the crystal had other rooms. One
room was an archive where scrolls and ancient records were stored.
Another room was dedicated to consultations with the Great Marce.
Here, royalty and representatives would make their requests for
services of the crystal.
There was also a study in the temple, which
served more as an office than a study. The Great Marce had been
in this room since early morning. He was reading a scroll written
centuries ago by one of his predecessors.
The Great Marce was a very old man. His body
had been growing feeble over recent years but deep inside he was
still very wise. Some say he was only eighty, while others swear
he was a hundred and twenty. No one knew his exact age, not even
him. His name was also lost. For many decades he had been known
only as the Great Marce.
The Great Marce was seated at a table where a
scroll seemed to trap his interest. His thin hands stumbled as he
advanced the weathered parchment. He had to squint from time to
time as he studied the script. Reading had become difficult for
him since his eyesight began to fade six years ago; that was when
he decided to take on an apprentice.
"Odius," he called in a raspy,
weathered voice. "Odius!"
He briefly looked out the doorway of the study.
After recalling that his apprentice had not yet arrived for work,
he returned his attention to the scroll.
He was a pleasant man, not the least bit rude
or overbearing. He was extremely thin and stooped at the
shoulders. The hair on his head was noticeably sparse but his
narrow face was covered with a thick white beard and mustache. He
lifted his eyes from the scroll when he heard someone enter the
temple.
"Odius?"
"Yes Master, it is I." Footsteps
followed the young man's reply. A moment or two later he was
standing at the doorway of the study.
"Good morning Master, are you doing well
today?"
The old man chuckled as he put much effort into
standing up.
"Like any other," his reply was
punctuated with a short cough.
"Come hither," he gestured with a
subtle wave of his fingertips, "come".
The Great Marce extended an arm as Odius
approached. He laid is hand on the young man's shoulder, then
drew him close as if to confide in him. He spoke softly.
"I have a concern greater than my well
being. That is; are you doing well today?"
A big smile came across the young man's face.
He always admired the way the old man expressed himself. He
thought it was clever and unique. The Great Marce was his role
model and he often made many feeble attempts to match the old
man's style.
"Like any other, Master," he nodded
with a smile, "Like any other".
The old man smiled back at Odius, then said
with a playful point, "Your well being is of greater concern
than mine".
"Certainly not, Master."
"Soon you will be the Great Marce, my time
grows short
very short."
"Speak nothing of this, Master!" He
put as much authority into his voice as he dare without offending
his master. "Your years could yet be plenty. No man can say
his time of death... Not even the Great Marce!"
The old man replied with a familiar grin. The
Great Marce often made this expression when he knew damn well he
was right. Odius always took it as meaning, `you're wrong'.
"Master!" There was great concern in
his voice. "This... this cannot be. I have much yet to
learn." He shook his head and placed a hand on his chest.
"I am not ready to take your place."
His master nodded.
Odius was not sure what he meant by the nod.
Did it mean the Great Marce thought he was ready, or did it mean
the Great Marce agreed with him? In either case, it seemed to
affirm his fears that the old man would soon pass on.
Odius hung his head. "I... I am not
ready to lose my friend."
"Nor I, young Odius. Nor I." After
a deep, slow breath he continued. "Death is the price we
must pay for living. And, to mourn the loss of a friend is the
price we must pay for friendship. But remember young Odius, the
bonds of true friendship cannot be broken, not by man, not by
death, not even by the gods.
"I wish to say that I am most proud of
you, Odius. You have been a good apprentice and will do honor to
the title of Great Marce. You have also been a good friend. You
are like a son to me."
"Thank you Master, your words are most
kind."
"You need not thank me for the
truth."
The Great Marce positioned the chair, then
gestured to Odius. "Sit," he pointed to a passage on
the scroll. "Read here".
Odius sat down, adjusted the chair, then began
to read as his master had instructed.
"...I speak now of the demise of Joda, son
of Lykos, who did on this day anger the great god Poseidon.
Hardship befell Joda after his wealth was lost to many games of
chance. He sorrowed in wine and ale, and wandered through the
streets of Atlanta late into the night. In wandering among the
public district, Joda happened across a monument honoring
Poseidon. Poseidon's monument was a statue of orichalcum in the
god's own likeness, whose pose was such that Poseidon held his
trident in one hand raised to the heavens. Joda did, on that
night, blame the great god Poseidon for his misfortune. In anger
from drink he cursed the god's name and impaled a flask of wine
unto the likeness of the god.
"Upon daybreak, the pose of that same
monument was such that Poseidon held his trident horizontal across
his chest, and the neck of Joda was held firm behind the trident's
staff. Joda was unable to free himself and lingered for three
weeks and two days until death took him. Men were unable to
remove his body until his flesh rotted from his bones and his
skull fell free from his corpse. That likeness of Poseidon still
holds such a pose to this day..."
"Stop reading," his master
interrupted. He strolled for several steps with his hands behind
his back. "What lesson can this passage teach?"
Odius thought for a moment. He already had an
answer ready but experience had taught him to think carefully
before replying.
"Foremost, never curse the name of
Poseidon while in a drunken stupor! ...But, as you have taught
me, there is more to a lesson than the obvious, one only has to
look."
"And what other lessons could you learn
from this passage, if you truly wanted to look?"
Odius thought for a moment longer. "That
the gods are powerful... and sometimes vain... and their justice
is swift."
"Justice?" asked the Great Marce.
Odius gave an uncomfortable glance toward the
heavens. In light of the passage on the scroll, he thought it
would be best to word his response very carefully.
"As a mere mortal, and unknowing of the
god's views, I would, with my humble wisdom, consider it vengeance
for the punishment did not fit the crime."
"Do you see another lesson here?"
"No, Master. Is there another?"
"What of you, young Odius? If you were
Poseidon, what punishment would you administer?"
Odius hated hypothetical questions because they
could never be put to the test. He would never be Poseidon.
After thinking for a moment he replied.
"Perhaps I would hold Joda for a day, then
release him. Joda's crime was to disgrace Poseidon, therefore
disgrace should be the punishment, not slow death."
"Hmm..." The Great Marce again
strolled away from Odius with his hands behind his back. He
thought for quite some time then turned toward Odius.
"Can you administer such a
punishment?"
Odius smiled. "You seek to trap me with
my own words, Master, just as you have so many times in the past.
Therefore, I must word my answer carefully, and it would be
lengthy."
The Great Marce smiled back. "You have
learned well, Odius. I trick you as a teacher and a friend. When
you become the Great Marce, others with less nobel motives will
also try to trick you. You must always take care when wording a
response. If it must be lengthy, then it must. I have already
trapped you with your own words, but continue, I wish to hear your
lengthy response."
"When you ask, can I administer such a
punishment, you ask many things. The crystal indeed has the power
to bend arms of a statue, or a tree, or most solid objects. Also,
I do possess skills that could summon such powers from the
crystal. With careful preparation, I could even arrange a victim
of my choosing. It would be possible, therefore, to trap a man by
such a means. But, to say I could administer such a punishment
would be wrong, because the crystal must not be used for
punishment. It is not allowed and would be very unwise."
"And I ask you again, Odius, is there
another lesson to be learned from this passage?" He pointed
to the scroll.
Odius was lost for an answer. He knew from
past experience with lectures of this nature that a simple
response of 'no' would be incorrect. Odius knew the Great Marce
was leading up to something, but he had no idea what it could be.
For lack of a better answer he replied with the obvious.
"Ah... Joda was a fool?"
The Great Marce looked a little disappointed
with his answer.
"If you had free use of the crystal for whatever desire,
that is you could use it for vengeance with a free conscious, and
someone disgraced you, what punishment would you
administer?"
Odius responded immediately, and with
confidence.
"None, Master. I would remember the deed,
and at some time should that person ask favor the deed would weigh
against him. But I would not take vengeance, it would only breed
trouble and ill."
"Ah...," the great Marce held a
finger up, "But you have stated earlier that if you were
Poseidon you would have held Joda 'the fool' for a day. In each
case you were disgraced, yet your punishments were markedly
different. Why this disparity in your judgments, young
Odius?"
"In the former I was speaking as a god, in
the latter I was speaking as a man."
"Is it true that a Great Marce in command
of the crystal is halfway between a man and a god?"
"It is, Master."
"Then, considering your sentence for
disgrace against a god, and disgrace against a man, what would
your sentence be for disgrace against a Great Marce? Would it be
a proportional measure of, say, hold the perpetrator for the half
part of a day?"
Odius realized the Great Marce had tricked him
again. It was rough on the ego, but he knew that he would leave
the experience with a little more of the master's wisdom. He
decided to hazard an attempt at salvaging his reputation.
"No, Master. The laws written in the
temple of Poseidon state justice must be balanced for
all."
"Then, if you reconsidered your position,
what would be your judgment for each case?"
"Judgement must be balanced Master. In
reconsidering I must say the sentence for each, disgrace against
a god, disgrace against a Great Marce, and disgrace against a man
would be; take no vengeance, but remember the incident to weigh
against future events."
The Great Marce smiled. With a nod he said,
"I am pleased, young Odius. I ask you again, is there
another lesson to be taught by this passage?"
"Yes, Master. Although the gods are
powerful and often provide for us, they can sometimes be vane and
unjust." Odius made another nervous glance toward the
heavens. "Many men have cursed the gods without recourse,
yet Joda was sentenced to slow death. Perhaps... Perhaps great
power, which tends to corrupt men, also corrupts the gods from
time to time. Perhaps in a weak moment, a god might be blinded by
anger and use his great power unjustly."
"And...," The Great Marce waited for
Odius to continue.
Odius thought for a moment, then shrugged his
shoulders.
"You miss the most obvious lesson of all,
young Odius."
Odius still looked confused. "Which
is?"
The Great Marce bent close to Odius then gently
poked him in the shoulder to punctuate each word which was spoken
slowly and clearly:
"Never anger the gods."
Odius chuckled at himself for overlooking
something so blatantly obvious. "I will remember that,
Master," he nodded with a laugh, "until my dying day, I
will remember that."
The Great Marce smiled then started for the
doorway. "Come, Odius." He walked with a slow shuffle
as he spoke. "A representative of the farming community has
requested rain." He stopped to looked at Odius, "You
must summon the rain today. I grow weary."
"Certainly, Master."
As they continued their walk, Odius became more
deeply concerned about his master's health. His master seemed to
be doing poorly today
more so than usual. His steps were shorter
than normal and breathing was clearly more difficult. Odius
ignored the obvious and hoped he would soon recover.
When they reached the crystal chamber, the
Great Marce had to pause to catch his breath. After a moment or
two, he gestured toward the crystal in its gold mount.
"Proceed, Odius, the farmers are waiting
for rain."
Odius approached the crystal. He briefly
prepared himself mentally, then placed a hand on the crystal. He
closed his eyes and started to concentrate.
"Remember," the Great Marce
interrupted the young man's concentration, "do not overdo it,
just a mild rain for, say, twenty minutes."
"Yes, Master."
Odius prepared himself again, only to be
interrupted again.
"Careful where you drop it! Don't let any
rain fall in the city, just the surrounding plains."
"Yes, Master, I'll be careful."
Odius once again prepared himself. He briefly
peeked at his master to make sure the Great Marce had nothing more
to add. Satisfied he could continue without interruption, he
began to concentrate on the task at hand.
Within seconds, the crystal began to glow with
a yellowish-green luster.
Clouds began to form in the skies just outside
the walls of Atlantis. Within minutes, white to light gray clouds
covered 77,000 square miles of farm land adjacent to the city.
Despite an abrupt change in weather, the sun still shone brightly
on Atlanta
Odius hit the mark just as his master had
instructed.
After one solitary bolt of lightning, a gentle
summer rain began. It lasted for about twenty minutes, just long
enough to saturate the ground and fill several hundred miles of
irrigation canals. When it was over, the clouds quickly dispersed
and a clean, fresh smell filled the morning air.
The weather that morning was not nearly as damp
in the northwest territories of Atlas. This mountainous region
was home to the most peculiar mountain in the world, Mount Atlas.
Mount Atlas was the highest of any in Atlantis and certainly the
most beautiful. It was peculiar because its incredibly steep
upper slopes towered deep into a permanent cloud bank. Clouds
always masked the peak of Mount Atlas, whatever the weather. Even
on the fairest of days a small patch of clouds deliberately hid
the mountain's summit. No one had ever seen the peak of Mount
Atlas.
The lower slopes of Atlas fanned out to more
hospitable terrain. These slopes were stocked with tall conifer
forests and big game. Several streams trickled from these slopes
and wove their way through miles of lofty foothills and hardwood
forests.
The foothills of Atlas were a paradise in its
own right. Small lakes and meadows interrupted a vast forest of
diversified hardwoods. Streams from Atlas poured into numerous
tiny lakes, the largest being only four or five hectares. Each
little lake would fill, then overflow as the stream continued its
journey through the foothills. Some lakes bordered meadows of
grass and wildflowers while most surrendered their shores to the
forest.
Many trees in that forest were extremely old,
some were more than twenty feet wide at the base. Tall columns of
ancient bark reached into a canopy one hundred feet high. Birds,
monkeys, and squirrels shared the green treetops which cast cool
shade to ferns and moss on the forest floor. The foothills were
crawling with wildlife from small mice to larger animals like
deer, unicorn, and bear. It was a pristine world far from any
plow or saw.
Few people ever laid eyes on this remote
paradise. It was far from any beaten path in a region where few
traveled. There was, however, a sole resident who lived deep in
that forest. Her name was Maia.
Maia, a young woman in her early twenties, has
lived alone in the foothills since her early teens. She was a
petite little woman; just over five foot and not quite a hundred
pounds. She was also remarkably attractive and carried a figure
that could make the gods jealous. Maia's simple beauty could not
be matched anywhere, not even by the Atlas paradise.
Like most Atlanteans she had fair skin, blue
eyes, and light brown hair which almost bordered blonde. Her
waist-length hair was usually kept in one long braid and tied at
the end with a strip of leather. She wore a pair of weathered
sandals and a simple two piece linen garment. The bottom half
remotely resembled a loin cloth, except the free ends were flared
out somewhat and laced together at the sides to form a short
skirt. The top half was little more than a strip of cloth four to
five feet long and about a foot wide. The cloth was draped over
the front of her from behind the neck, then tied just under the
breasts by a thin strip of leather around the chest. The free
ends of cloth hung down to the top of the skirt. It was
comfortable, Maia often wore it when she did her chores in the
forest.
The forest had been good to her and provided
her with almost everything she needed. On rare occasions, she
would gather surplus nuts or fruits and make a forty mile journey
to the nearest village. There she would trade her stock for
various goods that the forest could not provide. She enjoyed
these trips to the village, it was a chance to see people.
The people of that village were often kind to
her, yet, they kept their distance. Rumors and speculation gave
her a reputation of being something unnatural, probably because
she was somewhat different. Maia had little experience in
socializing with others and was not sure what was or was not
considered proper. She had a fear of saying or doing the wrong
things
and often did. Maia had spent too many years
alone in the forest.
Maia would have preferred to live in a village,
or even one of the larger cities
like cities the villagers sometimes spoke of.
She often fantasized about being a prominent lady in a big city,
although she knew she could not possibly handle the role. Yet, in
her fantasies she always said the proper things, made the proper
decisions, and fit into society like a glove.
Maia lived in the forest by her own choice.
She knew she would never see a city. Just going to the village
was risky enough. Maia chose the forest because she had something
to hide. For many years Maia had been plagued by a problem. It
was an unspeakable problem that destroys a person from within.
She could not bear to think of it or face it, much less display it
to others. This paradise of Atlas was her safe haven; a place
where she could pretend to hold some dignity. Should her nemesis
surface without warning, no one would know, no one would hear, and
no one would see.
All of that was far from her mind on this
lovely summer morning. Maia was deep in the woods gathering
mushrooms. The birds were singing, the monkeys had begun their
morning chatter, and the fresh morning mist still hung in the air.
She was happy and thought how great it was to be alive.
Occasionally she would whistle an answer to the
song birds twittering in the canopy overhead. Most of the forest
animals were familiar with her and comfortable with her presence.
She did not fear any of the woodland creatures. Even the most
fierce of all nature's beasts respected her and made no
threatening advances. Maia gave many of them names as if they
were pets. She was as much a part of the forest as the trees or
wolves.
Maia walked through the sparse undergrowth that
morning with a straw basket in her hands. She had already found
a dozen large mushrooms and was looking for a particular tree that
often sheltered a large patch of the little treasures. The tree
was not easy to find since it was one of many in a vast stand. It
was a large mahogany, which grew on a gradual hill more than a
half mile from her simple log home.
Maia found the tree she was looking for. She
crouched down on one knee then picked up a short stick to turn
over a layer of mulch at the foot of the tree. It was then she
noticed something disturbing; an uneasy change came over the
forest.
An unearthly quiet settled around her. All the
birds suddenly stopped singing
all of them. The chatter of monkeys also
stopped just as suddenly. The fresh morning mist now seemed to
hang pungent and heavy. Maia felt a cold twinge ripple through
her spine.
She slowly set down the stick, then her basket.
A uneasy, frightened look dominated her face. She could feel her
chest pounding with each heartbeat. Without making any sudden
movements, she carefully lifted her eyes toward the canopy. All
the monkeys sat still and motionless as they nervously sniffed the
air
they all seemed to be looking in the same
direction. She felt flush and frightened. A panic began to boil
inside her.
The animals sensed something wicked. Maia
could sense it too, it was her nemesis! Once again it surfaced
without warning like a snake in the garden. It was looking for
her! She knew there was no escape from this menace or the terror
it promised to bring.
Maia was on the edge of tears. She rose to her
feet with painfully slow movements. Her eyes began to water and
each shallow breath was taken with short sporadic jerks. Her face
twisted in agony as if she was going to cry, but she dare not.
Perhaps if she stood still...
It was too late. A hollow whistle, like that
of a woodwind, filled the forest. Maia knew that it had found
her. She broke into a dead run toward her house, screaming and
crying. Her shrill screams of panic and pleas for mercy echoed
through the treetops.
The monkeys cleared out and scattered across
the canopy as she ran through the woods in tears. The monkeys
were familiar with her, they knew this panic and they knew the
filth that would soon charge down the wake of her screaming
footsteps. They wanted no part of it.
Maia would put every ounce of life into that
half mile sprint because she knew what would happen when it caught
up with her. She didn't know exactly what this ungodly thing was,
just what it wanted
it sought pleasures of the flesh! She had
been through this hundreds of times before, and each was just as
terrifying as the first. The thought of it hardened her
stride.
Her sides ached unbearably but she would not
loosen her pace. She screamed until her throat was raw and dry.
A tight pain ran through her legs but her blind panic would not
let her back down. She still had a quarter mile to cover before
reaching her house.
This menace always pushed her to panic before
striking. It seemed to enjoy invoking fear and agony in her as
much as possible. It was savage and indiscriminate. It would
down her and have its way with her whenever or wherever it
desired. It didn't care where she was or who she was with. In
the past it often picked an opportunity to make a spectacle of her
in public. This is why she moved to the foothills; to be spared
the disgrace of prying eyes. The memory of those eyes still
burned deep inside her.
Maia pushed her pace even harder when she came
within sight of her home. She wanted desperately to make the
threshold before this thing caught up with her. Her home was no
sanctuary; the foul deed would be done, no question about it. The
absolute best she could hope for was a little privacy. She wanted
that privacy more than life itself. She could not bear the
thought of any onlookers
not even the woodland creatures.
Maia hit the door of her house with a thud.
The door swung open to the inside and Maia tumbled to the floor in
a pile. After a brief moment she curled to a fetal position. Her
strength was completely spent and her stomach tightened.
This was the way it wanted her; exhausted and
frightened. Her breathing was heavy and she found it difficult to
swallow. Her head throbbed with each hammering beat of her heart.
She could barely see. All her muscles ached with a wobbly
tightness. Her whole body glistened with sweat and trembled from
fear and exhaustion. She knew the worst was yet to come.
As she tried to get to her feet, she saw her
nemesis at the doorway. It was a hideous dark shadow without form
or soul. It constantly changed shape like a dusty night mist as
it writhed and slithered. She could see right through it as if it
were a thin haze of smoke, but smoke it was not. It had a mind
and will of its own. It slunk close to the ground as it poured
itself past the threshold. With it came the pungent musk of a
goat, except many times stronger.
"No, Please," she begged, then she
started to cry and back away.
A long, thin wisp of shadow reached from the
dark form like a tentacle. It wrapped itself around her ankle,
she could feel the cold pressure of its grip. At the same time,
the rest of the bulk began to advance.
She screamed as she reached down to free
herself from its hold. She knew from experience that it would be
pointless. She tried to grab the dark tentacle but her hand only
passed through it as if it were a shadow. Yet, she could see and
feel a spiral depression around her ankle where the formless
appendage held on. She struggled to no avail.
The shadowy tentacle began to extend as it
advanced up her leg, leaving a cold depression on her sweat-soaked
skin in its wake. When it reached the inside of her thigh, Maia
began to swing and strike at the larger bulk of the beast, even
though her hand would only pass through it. It let her struggle
and scream as the tentacle advanced further and dug itself under
her loin cloth. It wanted her to struggle, to work the last of
her strength. It craved the fear and adrenaline that rippled
through her body. The tentacle penetrated her then ripped her
loin cloth as it began to swell and undulate.
Maia screamed and swung on dusty shadow again.
Another smokey tentacle came out from the darkness and grabbed her
arm. It advanced quickly up her arm to her neck. The tentacle
wrapped itself around her neck, then stretched her body out flat.
Within seconds the foul shadow poured all over her, tearing off
her clothes in the process. It covered her entire body in an
attempt to absorb every bit of fear, and feel the struggle of
every little muscle.
Like an addict it craved for more and more
terror. Periodically it would tighten its grip around her neck
until she couldn't breathe. It lusted for every ounce of fear she
felt and every little quiver as she struggled to breathe. Her
terror mounted as she got closer and closer to passing out. This
terror only drove the creature's desire
it wanted more. When she was on the very
verge of passing out, it would loosen its grip, let her catch a
breath, then repeat the whole thing over, and over.

It would continue this nightmare of terror
until it had its fill. Maia knew she would be locked in the
monster's grip for at least the better part of an hour, sometimes
it was the better part of a day.
After it was over the foggy shadow would leave
the same way it came. Maia would gather her strength, then walk
to a stream where she would bathe until well after dark. It took
hours of scrubbing to get the pungent smell off her skin, but no
amount of scrubbing would ever let her feel clean again. She
would almost trade her life for that.
Maia had no idea what that foul creature was,
or why it tormented her. She only knew the agony it brought and
that she had no defense against it. For the time being it had its
fill and would stay away for several days, maybe even several
weeks. But sooner or later it would be back, like a snake in the
garden. No one could stop it
not even the gods.